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Movement Begs To Be

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Airy breath
with in a world on the verge

Movement begs to be

A voice strikes a chord,
awakening something new
in a world on the verge

Movement begs to be

~don't look back~

A beat that drives a way the sorrow
of a world on the verge

Movement begs to be

A note that hold a power to change
a world on the verge

Movement begs to be

I hold my breath
Silence
as the world starts to be
This is what I heard in the song 'Sycamore' by Forgonia

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I'd love to know if you think it flows well, and perhaps makes sense. if you listen to the song, it might help but.. I'd like to know if that has to be apart of it.
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Lady-Achika's avatar
Sweet and lyrical. Just like a song!